My is mind adrift with thoughts of bills, drama at church, the death of my mother. How can the sound be so calm while I am so disturbed? 136
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22 comments:
I like how you expressed yourself with the thoughts contrasting the picture. Well done. Best wishes.
I hope you reach the calm waters and safe haven soon...
loved the final line. awesome!
I hope your character finds inner peace :O)
Nature is inconsiderate sometimes.
Lets hope she finds her peace she needs.
You expressed yourself so well!
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Wow - Scott, as much as we all want to project that she is sitting there with peace and calm filling her soul, you probably captured it best. When we have those moments alone is when we have to listen to the truth we know and deal with.
Thanks for the reality check! And congratulations to your band. I remember it well. Lots of hard work, but so much JOY and Camaraderie~
Such conflict. Beautifully captured and written.
Have a great week x
Mine had a similar thought. :O)
Nature is such a calming influence when life is chaotic.
Mine is up.
PG
You expressed the torment of a mind very well in these few words. Well done :)
the sea will hold you My 140 Hope your week goes well
All of Monday wrapped into 140 characters....well done!
Jabblog's comment cracked me up
oh...my comment
only an open heart can be healed by nature...so good for them
I like it! If she stays there long enough, the calm sound will calm her. Great interpretation of the photo.
How indeed??? I too wonder how the world around me can be so calm while I am so disturbed.....Good one.
Cheers!
Scott, good one!
I have the key to the Sound. It has never experienced all of those ills you mentioned, not even one. :)
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Excellent entry.
I loved the "specifics," in contrast to the calm sound.
I could have a lot on my mind and let it go by being in that spot by the sea.
Serenity is deceptive
Dave
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