Monday, March 21, 2011

Lies, Deception and Misrepresentation

Wow, what a headline, eh? That's the theme for this week's Poetry Potluck, over at Jingle Poetry. So, crank up your creative mind, write a poem, sonnet, haiku or some other written delight and share it with us at Jingle Poetry.


Things I used to believe...

What's all the fuss about, I'm fine.
Why don't they just leave me alone, I'm fine.
I don't have a problem, I'm fine.
Hell, I'm not hurting anyone,
It's just a few drinks, maybe a joint or two.
I work hard, I deserve to party.

Besides, I can stop anytime I want.
There's lots of people worse than me,
I just like to party a little bit,
what's the harm in that?
I'm not hurting anything.

You need to mind your own damn business, I'm fine.
I never said I'd take care of that,
you've got your story all wrong.
I didn't hide that there, I don't know how it got there.
I pay my bills, I go to work.
Hell, I even got my degree and most of a Master's.

What do you mean I ought to get some help?
I'm fine I told you.
If God, my parents and you would just leave me alone,
everything would be a whole lot better.
I'm just fine the way I am, I am not hurting anyone.
Leave me alone.

I told you, I don't have a problem.

11 comments:

Sober Julie said...

Well written.
This isa good example of the avoidance dance we do.

theberrygirl said...

harsh and well said, brutal and honest, but somehow a drop of hope worked it's way into that, too.
excellent piece.

bendedspoon said...

fine poem! but not the hurting that goes with "I'm fine" :)

Jingle said...

honest,
that's what I like..

mixed feelings often bother us, Glad to see you let it out.

A++
have fun today.

fiveloaf said...

this is nice and original and hey! i'm fine also except that i bug you every potluck haha! here's mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/

Kim Nelson said...

I came from a home where the patriarch was much like this.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2010/05/19/dysfunction/

liv2write2day said...

Right on target, just feeding into that denial.

kavisionz said...

Aahh..superb!! How much we try to convince others (and ourselves) that it's all okay... whheeww! Denial is a real big form of theft (I think).. it robs one of truth, after all..

Very effectively written, my friend!

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Syd said...

Good one Scott. Willingness to want help is key.

Andy said...

Nice read. Thanks.